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As all of the Livid Dead is surrounding the trio, {{fanon|Barbara}} gives {{fanon|Rayman}} a vortex combat fatigue she found while fighting off some {{fanon|zombie chickens}}. {{fanon|Rayman}} uses it to create a tornado so big that it sends {{fanon|Ray of the Dead}}, {{fanon|Inspector Grub}}, and all the other undead creatures flying away in it. In the process, it also flings the candy into the sky as it rains down on the {{fanon|Teensy Village|village}}, where everyone collects and eats it.

{{fanon|Raymesis}} comes along, not very thankful for being freed from his painting, and he and {{fanon|Rayman}} count their candy, they learn that they are tied, when an extra one falls into {{fanon|Raymesis}}’ bag. {{fanon|Raymesis}} mocks {{fanon|Rayman}} and his friends and ~~walk~~ away. {{fanon|Rayman}} doesn’t care, however, just happy to have had a fun time with his friends. As the trio is eating their candy with {{fanon|Green Teensy|Chuck}} and {{fanon|Murfy}}, {{fanon|Rayman}} tells them that this was the best Halloween ever, and he hopes {{fanon|Teensula|next year}} will be even better.

{{fanon|Raymesis}} comes along, not very thankful for being freed from his painting, and he and {{fanon|Rayman}} count their candy, they learn that they are tied, when an extra one falls into {{fanon|Raymesis}}’ bag. {{fanon|Raymesis}} mocks {{fanon|Rayman}} and his friends and walks away. {{fanon|Rayman}} doesn’t care, however, just happy to have had a fun time with his friends. As the trio is eating their candy with {{fanon|Green Teensy|Chuck}} and {{fanon|Murfy}}, {{fanon|Rayman}} tells them that this was the best Halloween ever, and he hopes {{fanon|Teensula|next year}} will be even better.

Meanwhile, the tornado takes the Livid Dead back to the {{fanon|Land of the Livid Dead}}, as the door closes behind them, and {{fanon|Mister Death}} and {{fanon|Goth Teensy|Jack}} are still arguing. After {{fanon|Ray of the Dead}} falls out of the twister, he realizes that he lost all his candy, as he sighs and hangs his head in disappointment. But then, he sees {{fanon|Inspector Grub|Grub}}, who lands near some carnivorous flowers, as the {{fanon|ghosts|ghost}} who possessed him flies away. {{fanon|Inspector Grub|Grub}} wakes up, not knowing what happened, but then looks around and laughs in relief, happy to be safe and that he still has his candy. All of a sudden, {{fanon|Ray of the Dead}} appears in front of him with his minions and shouts “BOO!”, scaring {{fanon|Inspector Grub|Grub}}, as all the undead chases him around.

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 As all of the Livid Dead is surrounding the trio, {{fanon|Barbara}} gives {{fanon|Rayman}} a vortex combat fatigue she found while fighting off some {{fanon|zombie chickens}}. {{fanon|Rayman}} uses it to create a tornado so big that it sends {{fanon|Ray of the Dead}}, {{fanon|Inspector Grub}}, and all the other undead creatures flying away in it. In the process, it also flings the candy into the sky as it rains down on the {{fanon|Teensy Village|village}}, where everyone collects and eats it.
-{{fanon|Raymesis}} comes along, not very thankful for being freed from his painting, and he and {{fanon|Rayman}} count their candy, they learn that they are tied, when an extra one falls into {{fanon|Raymesis}}’ bag. {{fanon|Raymesis}} mocks {{fanon|Rayman}} and his friends and walk away. {{fanon|Rayman}} doesn’t care, however, just happy to have had a fun time with his friends. As the trio is eating their candy with {{fanon|Green Teensy|Chuck}} and {{fanon|Murfy}}, {{fanon|Rayman}} tells them that this was the best Halloween ever, and he hopes {{fanon|Teensula|next year}} will be even better.
+{{fanon|Raymesis}} comes along, not very thankful for being freed from his painting, and he and {{fanon|Rayman}} count their candy, they learn that they are tied, when an extra one falls into {{fanon|Raymesis}}’ bag. {{fanon|Raymesis}} mocks {{fanon|Rayman}} and his friends and walks away. {{fanon|Rayman}} doesn’t care, however, just happy to have had a fun time with his friends. As the trio is eating their candy with {{fanon|Green Teensy|Chuck}} and {{fanon|Murfy}}, {{fanon|Rayman}} tells them that this was the best Halloween ever, and he hopes {{fanon|Teensula|next year}} will be even better.
 Meanwhile, the tornado takes the Livid Dead back to the {{fanon|Land of the Livid Dead}}, as the door closes behind them, and {{fanon|Mister Death}} and {{fanon|Goth Teensy|Jack}} are still arguing. After {{fanon|Ray of the Dead}} falls out of the twister, he realizes that he lost all his candy, as he sighs and hangs his head in disappointment. But then, he sees {{fanon|Inspector Grub|Grub}}, who lands near some carnivorous flowers, as the {{fanon|ghosts|ghost}} who possessed him flies away. {{fanon|Inspector Grub|Grub}} wakes up, not knowing what happened, but then looks around and laughs in relief, happy to be safe and that he still has his candy. All of a sudden, {{fanon|Ray of the Dead}} appears in front of him with his minions and shouts “BOO!”, scaring {{fanon|Inspector Grub|Grub}}, as all the undead chases him around.